GivingTuesday Email Templates and Subject Line Guide

Published: November 9, 2022 / Updated: October 2023
GivingTuesday Email Templates and Subject Line Guide
the authorby Janet Bargewell, GiveDirect Support

Millions of givers each year participate in GivingTuesday. To make the most of this giving tradition, you need to develop a communications strategy that effectively engages supporters.

You may already have excellent solicitation and thank you letters. But to help you maximize your strategy, we are providing you with email templates to inspire and guide your communication efforts. Although these templates were developed specifically with GivingTuesday in mind, they can be tailored for any campaign or event throughout the year. Feel free to download and modify these templates for your own needs.

In this Guide you will find:

  • Tips for a captivating subject line. NEW
  • 5 email templates for GivingTuesday and the end of year campaign

Are you Ready? Then, let's GO!

Writing a Captivating Subject Line

Before we dive into the email templates, let's take a look at what it takes to write a good email subject line.

  • Keep subject lines to 9 words or fewer. Extensive research has been done on the best length for a subject line. Different researchers produce different results, but all agree that shorter is better -- a safe length is 44 characters. The average inbox displays about 60 characters on a desktop while the average mobile device displays only 30 characters. Anything else will get cut off.

Pro-Tip: Don't waste space with your charity name or today's date -- that information will be available in your email.

Take a look at these statistics and subject lines.

  • An email displayed on a 15" laptop will display 98 characters before being cut off.
  • An email displayed on an iphone Mail App will display 46 characters before being cut off.
  • An email displayed in an Android Outlook App will display 38 characters before being cut off.

If you used a subject line of "What would our community look like if there were no homeless on the streets?" here's what it would look like in the different email apps.

subject line examples
  • Build on the sense of urgency. GivingTuesday lends itself well to an urgent tone since donors are encouraged to get involved on this one special day. Time-specific or goal-based language like "No time to waste -- donate now!" or "Just two donations away from our goal!" can be a great motivator.

  • Address recipients by their first names. Your email platform should allow you to automatically program your supporters' first names into the subject line and the opening greeting of your emails. The more personalized your messages, the more likely supporters are to open your emails.

  • Ask a question to peak curiosity or state something unexpected. How about "We need to raise money for international refugees!" Boring!! Try "What do you know about xyz refugees?" or "What does it feel like to lose your home?"

    Here's a real life example of an unexpected statement: an education foundation recently sent an email subject line that read: "Our teachers are refusing to teach math today!" When the donor opened the email, it explained that the school was celebrating Curl Up With A Good Book Day, a day devoted to reading and writing.

  • Let preview text help tell your story. Some email services such as Constant Contact will allow you to write a preheader (or subtitle) as email preview text. The preheader displays in the inbox below the subject line in some email applications. By default, the preheader will populate with the first line of the body of your email. However, you might want to manually write in the preheader text. Let your preview text expand on or respond to your subject line, making your reader want to know more.

  • Use limited capital letters. Capitalizing the entire subject line is a poor practice for email marketing. Rather, use capital letters only to emphasize words like 'you', or the deadline or impact.

  • Keep a swipe file. Whenever you get an email with a great subject line and it's intriguing enough that YOU open the email, cut-and-paste it into a Word file. Make a note about what caught your eye. Then the next time you need to write a subject line, you can refer to your swipe file for inspiration.

  • Don't stop with just one subject line. Since your subject line can mean the difference in your email being opened or deleted, make sure to take your time with this task. Write 8 to 10 draft subject lines. If time allows, sleep on it; roll them over in your mind; try them out on friends or colleagues, then pick your favorite.

  • Use action words -- Donate vs Give. Donate is a good action word and is probably used most often in an organization's call to action. But did you know there is research on when one is better than the other?

    While donate and give are often used interchangeably, there are subtle differences that can impact the effectiveness of a donor's generosity. Donate typically refers to giving money or resources to a specific organization or cause, while Give can encompass a wider range of actions such as volunteering time or physical items like clothing or food.

    When one donates, there is a deliberate choice to support a particular cause or organization with financial resources. On the other hand, giving can be more informal and spontaneous. It can be an act of kindness that may involve giving of one's time or resources to someone in need without necessarily aligning with a specific organization or cause.

    Other good action words include: join, stop, act, change or transform.

Email Templates

General Emails to encourage giving, sharing and supporting

1.

November 21st
Send this email to your donor base not later than one week prior to GivingTuesday to start generating excitement about the "Day of Giving."

Dear {donor first name},

Can you feel the excitement starting to build this time of year? The beginning of the holiday season is an exciting time of year, and we invite you to kick off the season with us on GivingTuesday, November 29th!

GivingTuesday is a global day of giving back. On the Tuesday following Thanksgiving you will have the opportunity to join people around the world and support a cause that is close to your heart.

This GivingTuesday, help us {explain your mission}. By joining us in this mission you can {explain your goal for GivingTuesday}.

Mark your calendars. Spread the word. And Stay Tuned for more details!

donate button

(link to your GivingTuesday donation form)

[Name]
[Title]
[Organization]

{include your SM icons and links}

2.

November 24th

Send this email the Friday after Thanksgiving to those donors who did not respond to your November 21st appeal.

Make sure to segment this appeal. Tailor it for each segmented group with different suggested donation amounts.

{consider adding an emotional or motivational photo}

Dear {donor first name},

{If you add a photo, consider adding a caption for the photo here to increase the likelihood of an emotional response}

This year, we're celebrating GivingTuesday to raise ${fundraising goal} in 24 hours. This funding will go to support our team in [mission programming], [optional mission or purpose statement], and [optional mission or purpose].

We need your help! Will you consider making a $[suggested donation amount] donation?

Remember, It's OK to donate early!

donate button

(link to your GivingTuesday donation form)

[Name]
[Title]
[Organization]

{include your SM icons and links}

3.

November 30th/December 1st

At the end of your campaign it is important to thank your donors, for both time and money. There are many organizations they could support, but they chose you. Make sure they know they are appreciated so they keep coming back.

Send this email to every donor who contributes to your GivingTuesday campaign.

Use this template if you met your GivingTuesday goal.

{consider adding a celebration photo}

Dear {donor first name},

We did it! We surpassed our initial fundraising goal yesterday and totaled $[total fundraising revenue] in generous donations for [summary of organization mission]. We couldn't have done it without you!

Thanks to your generous $[donation amount] gift, we'll be able to [example of mission programming] more than ever before. Thanks again, YOU are the best!!

But the year isn't over yet. Keep an eye out for additional ways to get involved as we continue our end-of-the-year fundraising initiatives.

Thanks again and stay tuned!

[Name]
[Title]
[Organization]

{include your SM icons and links}

Use this template if you did not meet your GivingTuesday goal.

{consider adding an emotional or motivational photo}

Dear {donor first name},

Thank you for your generous $[donation amount] gift. We didn't quite meet our GivingTuesday goal but are pleased to let you know we got really close! We successfully raised {$_______} of our {$_________} goal.

Even though we are a little short, what we did raise will go a long way! Because of your generosity, we will still be able to [example of mission programming]. Again, thank you for your donation, YOU are the best!!

But the year isn't over yet -- we still have work to do, so keep an eye out for additional ways to get involved as we continue our end-of-the-year fundraising initiatives.

Thanks again and stay tuned!

[Name]
[Title]
[Organization]

{include your SM icons and links}

4.

End of Year Fundraising Appeal

For every nonprofit, the month of December is crucial. Fundraising studies show that more than 30% of total annual giving happens in the final month of the calendar year. So, as you enter December, fundraising efforts must increase. Make sure a call to action is included in all communication efforts and that the call to action includes a sense of urgency.

This appeal should also be segmented. Your repeat end-of-year givers might receive one version and your first-time donors a different one. Or you may want to segment by general donors and recurring donors.

Send this email to your donor base not later than December 15th.

Subject line: We need YOU to reach our year-end goal.

Dear [Donor Name],

We're [percentage]% of the way to reaching our annual fundraising goal with less than [number of days] remaining in the year.

Can you help us enter into the new year with the funding to make a difference on [mission and program goals]?

Please consider giving via our online donation form here [link to online donation form]. Or, check out our Ways to Give page [link to ways to give page] to find out how else you can support the cause, including matching gifts, volunteer opportunities, in-kind donations, and more.

Thank you for your ongoing support. Our work is not possible without you.

[Name]
[Title]
[Organization]

{include your SM icons and links}